Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Shut Out

Analysis of Shut Out

1st stanza -

  • "The door was shut" - a simple sentence/one idea (defensive)
  • "Iron bars" and "flowers bedewed and green" - contrast/juxtaposition
  • "Iron bars" - what she wants is in reach but the bars are acting as a barrier
  • "My garden" - possessive "my" and "i" throughout
  • "Bedewed and green" - adjectives - reinforces the narrators attitude
  • "Garden" - love? death? person/relationship?
2nd stanza -
  • Repetition of "from", "bough" and "flower" - reinforces nostalgic tone
  • Entire stanza is a complex sentence = complex feelings/thought process
  • Sentence variety from 1st stanza
  • "Lost" - positioning in the stanza draws attention to it
3rd stanza -
  • "Shadowless spirit" - inhuman, scary, frightening - reference to death
  • "Blank and unchanging" - reinforces previous point
  • "Like the grave" - simile
  • "Let" - imperative dialogue - desperate not forceful
4th stanza -
  • "He answered not" - blunt tone and simple sentence
  • "One small twig" - reinforces desperation
  • Lack of dialogue from the spirit
5th stanza -
  • "Spirit" - afterlife - another reference to death
  • "Build a wall" - wall and garden are symbolic
  • "He" - masculine pronoun - possible link to a relationship
  • "Straining eyes" - reinforces desperation and frustration
6th stanza -
  • "So now" - past to present tense - less anger - more resigned - realisation
  • "Blinded with tears" - hyperbole
  • "Delightful land" - reference to land = hyperbole
7th stanza -
  • "And good..." and "And dear..." - parallelism
Overall -
  • 1st person narrator/voice/persona
  • Regular rhyme scheme 
  • May have lost something/someone
  • Iambic tetrameter - 4 beats in each line
  • Title "Shut Out" - sentence fragment - incomplete - terse and aggressive tone
  • Lexical choices - 2nd and 3rd stanza
  • 1st stanza - impression of rhythm and rhyme 
  • Choice of verbs and connotations 
  • Pleading and desperate tone

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