1st stanza -
- "The door was shut" - a simple sentence/one idea (defensive)
- "Iron bars" and "flowers bedewed and green" - contrast/juxtaposition
- "Iron bars" - what she wants is in reach but the bars are acting as a barrier
- "My garden" - possessive "my" and "i" throughout
- "Bedewed and green" - adjectives - reinforces the narrators attitude
- "Garden" - love? death? person/relationship?
2nd stanza -
- Repetition of "from", "bough" and "flower" - reinforces nostalgic tone
- Entire stanza is a complex sentence = complex feelings/thought process
- Sentence variety from 1st stanza
- "Lost" - positioning in the stanza draws attention to it
3rd stanza -
- "Shadowless spirit" - inhuman, scary, frightening - reference to death
- "Blank and unchanging" - reinforces previous point
- "Like the grave" - simile
- "Let" - imperative dialogue - desperate not forceful
4th stanza -
- "He answered not" - blunt tone and simple sentence
- "One small twig" - reinforces desperation
- Lack of dialogue from the spirit
5th stanza -
- "Spirit" - afterlife - another reference to death
- "Build a wall" - wall and garden are symbolic
- "He" - masculine pronoun - possible link to a relationship
- "Straining eyes" - reinforces desperation and frustration
6th stanza -
- "So now" - past to present tense - less anger - more resigned - realisation
- "Blinded with tears" - hyperbole
- "Delightful land" - reference to land = hyperbole
7th stanza -
- "And good..." and "And dear..." - parallelism
Overall -
- 1st person narrator/voice/persona
- Regular rhyme scheme
- May have lost something/someone
- Iambic tetrameter - 4 beats in each line
- Title "Shut Out" - sentence fragment - incomplete - terse and aggressive tone
- Lexical choices - 2nd and 3rd stanza
- 1st stanza - impression of rhythm and rhyme
- Choice of verbs and connotations
- Pleading and desperate tone
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